Love is a fragile thing.
and very complicated.
it cant be define because each person
finds it in a different ways.
all i know that
love is gentle and love is kind
you can fall in love many times
or fall in love once.
for me, i have fallen in love three times
this first love will never deny me.
he saved me a long time ago
instead of me dying he took my place.
he is my lord and savior
my second love is my mom
my mom has gone through a lot of things
in her life and she still stands on her own
she has taught me about love and understanding
she saved my life by trusting love
i went through a rough patch
and she said that i should have faith in love
my last and only love is my future husband
he is always there for me
his love for me makes me swell with joy and happiness
sometimes i dance with joy when i see his face
his eyes just makes me sparkle when he winks at me.
his voice and his silliness makes me laugh
his soft touch makes me crave more.
when i lie next to him i think about my vow and
and i smile to god and i thank him for sending me
this beautiful man i love
the best thing about love is that it will be returned
and it wont be hateful, abusive and it wont ever leave you
love is forever
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Written September 8th, 2006
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You are so right about love being fragile and indefinable, my friend. As you imply wisely in your poem, you may find love once only or several times but the most important aspect of love is, as you say, trust. If love is based on superficial, external beauty then it is mere lust and doomed to failure. The person who sacrificed himself to help you did indeed show real love since love is not self-centred. Long may you find the love and fulfilment you presently cherish. Good luck. camus
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you should have recited this at your wedding
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That last line says it all. Well done.
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i like this write i shows alot of passion i wouldnt neccesarily say love but still it is very very good.
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