I'm Lonely and Alone,
Everything seems to be blown.
You and I were together,
Our relationship has changed like weather.
Lonely, Depressed, thats how my life is!
Can someone come and buy me gifts?
Live, Like, Lie
This is what is Life!
I'm Lonely and Alone,
Everything seems to be blown.
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Written September 8th, 2006
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Very nicely done. Good luck to you.
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sorry you felt lonely a fantastic write tho you are so talented you know how to use words ..smiles aunty cheeky
xxxxx
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Wonderfullll! =]
Damn Good! I never knew you were so TALENTED!
Well, you won't ever feel Lonely and Alone again now because I have come girly! 
Love you alot! 
Nida -
Excellent!
Oh WOW! Now that was really sweet, very nicely and very well written...You hav got tremendous potential, sweetie!!!...Keep Writing..!!
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Very good poem
This is a very good piece. It is from the heart. And your feelings are all over this. Is not everyone 'Lonely and Alone' at any one time? Well done with this -
This is really sad. I'm sorry you felt or still feel this way. you truely are not alone I know how love feels when it's gone. great work though.
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Wonderful
Your not alone sweetheart Grand Pops is here, and will always be here to catch your tears and make you smile and to tell you, your so special!
Wonderful poem sweetheart!
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Oh sweetie, so sad this is. I am so sorry you are still having sis problems. I was hoping all would be better by now. Nice write of love and truly heart felt.
Good luck in the contest!
Edited on Sep 08, 6:56 because ''. -
this is a beautiful poem. some of the rhyming sounded a little bit forced but the poem was from the heart. and thats what counts. great poem. good luck in the contest and keep writing
Thankyou For Entering
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