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Dedication to John T. Jones











                       Strong willed is all I would say.
'                      Hardened by life is all I know.
                       My feelings I will never show.
                     Things in my past, you wonder why?
                        Why?  I'm like I am.
                     You never said, but I knew.
                    I know you loved me as much as I did you.
                     Years passed, but it's  never too late
                      to know the one you appreciate.
                  No one ever knew, until the day we lost you.
                        Now it lives forever in me.
                 You'll never know the way you touched my life
                        forever,and now you'll guide me.

Author notes

A good friend of mine lost their father and touched their lives forever.
Written September 7th, 2006

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  • sbabopj
    September 17, 2006
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    Oh God! I know what it is to loose someone dear to you. You really never know until their gone. Sad isn't it.

  • sbabopj
    September 17, 2006
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    Oh God! I know what it is to loose someone dear to you. You really never know until their gone. Sad isn't it.

  • Kenshins wife
    September 13, 2006
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    this is a great poem. I'm so sorry to hear about the loss. he sounds like had a had great impact on your life. This is such a wonderful read.