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Repeat

Pen tapping,
mind wrenching-
conscious

Speaking of dead kingdoms,
warlords, and prophets is
second nature

Pen tapping,
mind numbing-
subconscious

Ghosts of unrequited dreams
are scattered vividly across my mind,
they breathe

Emptied eyes,
restless heart-
damning

Haunted by one winged angels
and injuries caused by
the unfaithful

Emptied eyes,
broken heart-
common

Negativity abscesses in oceans
of ill-gotten fears, drowning
feeble hopes

Remorseful tongue,
bleeding conviction-
plague

A pen always flows
where my words
dry up

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Written September 7th, 2006

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  • BlackRabbit9x
    March 16, 2007
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    You've captured the essence of the writers' heart in this piece. Loved it very, very much!


  • yunimori
    September 7, 2006
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    true

    Being a writer myself, I know the feeling you have described. I have felt it quite often. This poem is so true to character. I love it.

  • Yoder13
    September 7, 2006
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    Wow, I really like this poem. Knowing you I can tell this poem comes from the heart, and this makes it so much better. You use your writing to express your emotions, there is of course no better way, and you are great at it.

  • becky123
    September 7, 2006
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    oh wow. i really like the form and flow of this. the last phrase caught me off guard. great write!