get it
got it
keep it
the row I always learned
no giving to the poor
no entering a expensive shop
I got it, I'll keep it!
keep your hands of my stuff
mine mine mine
Don't you dare to call my selfish
I have more money then you have
(around 3 bugs)
HA!
I got you there!
I'm stronger then you'll ever be
nicer then you'll ever be
richer then you'll ever be
(oh! This is 2 cents a letter!)
Ending with this short and strong note
I am rich!
I have mor ..
>> End of message <<
Author notes
this boy just lost all of his 3 dollars on a message!!
poor kid
lol
it's late (22.42 pm Europe)
and I can't sleep (have to get up at half past 6 )
enjoy
Written September 7th, 2006
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what is the problem with changing my title? It was an editing mistake I made .. you're like talking to me as if i'm a dumb person ..
this is called: free poetry.
I write down what I want you to know, the way I like it .. It may sound very strange to you, but it's sad that a POET can't recognize a poem ..
sorry .. I won't let you cut me off like this
~omichi -
thats really really good!! i wuv you sis. <3 (L)
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Not getting into a debate about whether I think this is an example of poetry of not, just in reply to funkychickenhaha. For such a condescending tone you show yourself to be failry ignorant about this whole poetry thing.
What does rhyme have to do with it being a poem? -
Ok. First of all I don't even think this is a poem. Second you edited the title. Third it does not rhyme. Fourth you do not have my comment box requirements. I bet you can guess what fifth is. Come on. If you cannot guess that is very sad.
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Megan
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