Form the depths of darkest sin
The dawn of darkness shall begin
When the one arises form the deep
All shall fall apart in weep
Form a land of dark despair
A land of hate regret and fear
Shall arise the one from death
The one who bears the mark, the crest
The one who was form demon born
The skies shall yield, cease to dawn
And the from the depths comes endless fear
An endless night, a true nightmare
The beings soon shall rule the night
To banish all, to end the light
The ones of old, of ancient times
To start and endless archaic rhymes
And then the one is given will
And then the choice to save or kill
And should the one of ancient times
Decide to end these endless rhymes
Then the one will end its life
Descend unto a land of strife
But in this realm all shall be well
While the one rests in its hell
But if the one decides to kill
The all shall bow before its will
And shall ensue most horrid peace
And all was one now shall cease
For ancient ones and endless fright
Shall rule within eternal night
And thus we shall be torn asunder
And this time mortals shall dwell under
The old ones shall inherit land
By the power of the great ones hand
And the great one crying scarlet tears
Shall bring to life you darkest fears
And from the depths of darkest sin
The dawn of darkness shall begin.
Author notes
A thing I wrote for english...
Comments appreciated not required...
Written September 7th, 2006
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You should get a very good grade on this in your English class... One thing... third stanza down, you want the word "From" I think.
You are a talented poet and I hope you keep sharing your lovely lines with us! 
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it made my skin crawl, haha.
i like it. and its written how i normally write, in rhyming couplets (:
i like it a lot hun. xx
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gave me chills and goosebumps..walking on the dark side...drop the "ands" dont need them in last 2 stanza...well done. here..
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fair work
this work needs a little more thought on some parts it doesnt make sense to me the meaning gets twisted up.i understand that
the coming of the messiah is going to judge us and the world is dark because sin and if we commit suicide we will walk the earth eternaly and if he rejects us we will burn eternally in hell this world is hell and if we continue and not give our life to the lord he wont know us when he returns so elaborate a little more
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