Death is just a kiss away
For you, my love, I have to say
"Love me tender love me sweet"
For this is the last time we shall meet
You tore my heart out, satisfied
You watched and laughed while I lay and died
Back when we were both together
You said that this would last forever
But now I see your darker side
I see the side you try to hide
I have nothing left to feel
There's nothing left that, at all seems real
Now shining my shoes, looking dapper and neat
I gaze at your photo as I rise to my feet
I stare at your photo, see the smile you gave
You tiled mine, so I'm tiling your grave
I'm digging and digging, the deeper I go
The more I can see you, too late now I know
You had your chance, you threw it away
I'll make you pay everyday
But I won't be another useless teen, who committed suicide
Not at all, I'll punish you for every tear I've cried
I can't even tell your crying, in amidst this storm
I press my lips to you, my love, and your lips forever warm
You should know this final kiss, is not a kiss goodbye
This, my love is just a kiss before you die
Now be this choice, or be this fate
The meaning of this thing called love... The meaning of it is hate.
Author notes
I believe that to have true love you have to truely hate something else first... No matter what it is you hate... You have to have hate first... That what I think
Written September 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- the meaning of 'true' love (read the rules) by Nitenovanavium.
400 points, ended September 18, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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omg i love this to death!!!!
it's so perfect, your really good!!!
can't wait to read more, ha thanks for just writting awsome poetry lol
laterezzz
stephanie -
Your Auther note made me think- you're right- "there is a thin line between love/hate- yeah I can definitely relate to that...
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this is really captivating and kinda haunting! great write! it also really made me think about what u said in ur comments! great images 2! Love the rhyming. Good luck in the contest!
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cool poem man i enjoyed it alot, its a good thing tht you put that small explanation in your author comment or i wouldent have understood it ^_^ good luck
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