in this room
i sit with the lights off
trying to release all troubled tension
with empty air and
familiar thoughts
i keep hearing passion
urging me to drop
all second guesses
urging me to move
with movement
leading and leaning
towards your lips...
morning will creep
upon me
revealing what remains and
all that's formed from loving him
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Written September 7th, 2006
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excellent
that was an awsome way to write that. i love the ending. ur very creative. that was an awsome way to write that. i love the ending. ur very creative. Did you read anything from me on this site? -
very good
hmmm...theres something very sinfull hidden in the very sweet and interesting lines of this poem.i cant say that i can condone such behavior.as a matter of fact im calling your mother and telling her EVERYTHING.oooooooh youre gonna be in big BIG trouble.this poem was very nice and smooth and somehow very secretive feeling to me.like i almost felt as if i was doing something wrong just reading it.thats a great job youve done on this work.
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