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Just Crazy.

Can anybody save me?
I'm living my life in strings.
I'm crazy.
Won't somebody maybe
Come and get me from here
I'm not lazy
Not so hazy
I'm just crazy.
Can't anybody save me?

Can anybody save me?
I'm living my life in strings.
I'm crazy
For all things.
Can anybody maybe
Find me far away from here
Living so close
Breathing in fear
Edging too near
Becoming less clear
I'm just crazy.
Can't anybody save me?

Author notes

I'm not sure that this is finished.
I have two versions. One is longer and slightly "Court of King Caratacus" i think.
If you recognise two lines from a previous poem of mine, (Oh no, I plagiarised myself!) they were both written awhile ago and I can't remember just how close they were chronologically. But you may notice I do a bit of that. This is the second time i've had one or two lines the same in poems that aren't connected. I suppose it's just a style.
Written September 6th, 2006

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  • Donotcallmebenny
    November 5, 2007
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    ha my dear heart, you sure are crazy, but i won't ever save you from it coz i love it so.