Falling from the page, the book of soul now open. Tear it out quickly, can you see how broken? Yes, broken, that is what I said. Lying in the shadows, amongst the living dead. Cold and numb, trying not to really care. Breathing for existence, the stale and stagnant air. Read each and every page that this book can hold. Hurry, turn the page, for it's getting ever cold. The flames fast fade, bringing on the night. Darkness all around, words disappear from sight. A language that we keep, a secret I must tell. Close the book now, this is my own hell. The light is gone, now all is complete black. I told you once to leave, now there is no going back. But listen close, and you will hear.... nothing, there is not a sound anywhere. Silence is my prison, my building inner rage. Look again at that book, my soul, a blank page.
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Written September 6th, 2006
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Thanks hun, you don't know how much I appreciate it.
Storm -
Lots of emotion babe, even if it is dark. You know I'm here for sweetheart. Have some hugs from me
. I love you babe!
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Ok so a little more than pent up emotions. More like blow my brain out of the top of my head, need to get it out now!! emotions.
You always have been love, you and she both. And I thank you.
Storm -
Damn, Storm. Pent up emotions, huh? You know I am always here, hun. uh whenever I can get my mind straight, that is. Big hugs and love to you.
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Thank you for your comment Sandy. Mind boggling and letting off some pent up boohoo steam, lol.
Storm -
I felt the pain and the emotion within every line of this piece, my friend..wow!
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Thanks Kari, much appreciated.
Storm -
Thank you James, appreciate your comment.
Storm -
Yeah just a bit of mind rambling Vickie. Thanks for the comments.
Storm -
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This was very deep and from the heart. Thanks for sharing sis.
Kari -
'Silence is my prison' - I can identify completely. An interesting write Storm. 'the book of soul now open', love it. Great imagery and emotion. Dark, but from the heart. ~~~James
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Storm, this is kind of painfully dark. Most definitely emotional. Hope all is okay with you. I'm here if you need to talk hon.
My love to you
Vickie -
Thanks hun, appreciate the comments.
Storm -
Wow what can I say? Well written, good flow, I loved it. I felt the passion all the way to the end. Thanx for sharing.
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