I miss the way we were
I miss the way we laughed
I miss the way you touched me
No matter how many bruises it left...
I know it wasn't wrong
But it sure as hell wasn't right!
But it felt so good for so long
Just to think of you each night
Intelligence is bliss
As we all will come to know
And the truth is that the lie I told you
Is all you'll ever know...
Author notes
Wow...its been a while since I had new stuff on here....
Written September 6th, 2006
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EMO KID!!!
it really has been a while, but im glad youre writing again. i hope to see your stuff on here more often. i want to believe that youre going to be alright with yourself from here on in. i want to make sure that youre going to love and respect yourself more than anyone else, joee. i wish muchos luck and and stuff... and about the poem: its very descriptive, but pessimistic. its what you FELT{past tense}, and im hoping for something a little more uplifting from you. try to write something about you feeling good. it'll make you smile when youre through with writing it.
anywayz...luv u lots and always will joeebabi...
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