If I could have one wish before I die,
I'd wish to fall in love.
I want to say thoes words for my last ones,
As they fall off of my tongue.
I want them to echo,
And remain in his head,
But most of all,
I want him to live on,
And fall in love again.
But love seems like ice,
And it slips away from me.
I've had every chance in the world,
But haven't taken opprotunity.
Recently, I've let it pass,
Because I was to scared.
And now I sit writing about it,
And how it's my biggest fear.
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Written September 6th, 2006
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NIce, I really liked the need for this devine emotion that everyone else but you seems to be feeling, and this wish of dying with it. I think it was a little too prose for my taste, and the third to last line has a 'to' that should be 'too.' However, I did like the last line.
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