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right

my head is spinning
its all a blur
i feel isolated
its all so wrong

my heart is pounding
its all a trick
i feel anxious
its all so right

my body is melting
its all a ride
i feel like a dream
its all so wonderful

my hand is in yours
its all in love
i feel right
its all so perfect.

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Written September 6th, 2006

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  • scarsxnxtears
    October 9, 2006
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    no love found, my dove.
    just the dreams of the love that feels right.
    You knnow me, I can't settle. haha
    I am having trouble writing about you, though. I know it will come to me soon enough, I just need some inspiration?

    I miss you too, honey.
    Imma be around more often, promise.♥


  • leftoverinterest
    September 15, 2006
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    My sweet Val, have we found love? Wait, that means youre cheating onme, DAMN WOMEN!! I enjoyed your poem, I like the quick, simple thoughts, sometimes (and this would be one of those times for sure) they make great poetry. Take care sweetie, I miss you, and I hope you are well.