Dangling on the edge of despair
High above the ground
Crawling and grabbing
I'm losing grip
Fingers aching
Beginning to slip
Looking Below
Eyeing the fall
Should i resist?
Should i stall?
But another day comes
I'm still holding on
Regaining the space
that i thought was long gone
Author notes
Written September 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Write about you - I want your emotions by Losing Hope.
300 points, ended September 13, 2006, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hmm. Interesting.
I enjoy how this piece gives the feeling of falling, or about to fall. Especially seeing as it sais:
Looking Below
Eyeing the fall
Should i resist?
Should i stall?
Hehe. great job.
Good luck in the contset :]
-Flo_<3
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