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The Fall

Within an autumnal garden,
a maiden lifts Newton's apple.
Tainted by a sooty angel,
she feels the gravity of love.

The fall.

Later,
with innocence deceased,
and knowledge born,
she swells with child.

A fall.

Author notes

I'm not too sure about this one, I hope you can see what I see in it.
Written September 6th, 2006

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  • MissStranger
    October 1, 2007

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    hmmm...a true brain0twisting!...still reflecting upon it! but it's so nice to check on your latest work(2006???...yet what about 2007? )! i knew i forgot one special poet to mention on my fav list


  • Errant Panther gold member
    September 6, 2006
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    extremely well crafted, and a very thought provoking piece, have not seen a new one from you for a while but your muse obviously has not lost contact with you or it's unique style


  • Rita Krocha
    September 6, 2006
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    Hmm.....not bad at all!


  • forever dreaming
    September 6, 2006
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    I love that line:

    with innocence deceased.

    I actually quite like what you have done with this piece. Well done.