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How Dare You!

I thought you loved me
for who I am,
not for something I'm not.

We were friends
for like 5 years,
what happened to us?

I thought you were my friend
and I was yours,
I guess I was wrong.

Friends 1 day
and enemies the next
What? Are we PMS'n?

Time is pulling us away
and making us strangers,
Why is this happening?

All these dreadful summers
have tugged us apart,
Until finally, we both snapped.

I don't know you anymore
and it's hurting me inside!
And you don't seem to care!

You seem to ignore my crys
for you to love me again,
So what are you shunning me now?

You have a lot of guts
to walk past me everyday,
And not even seem to notice me.

Your killing me inside
little by little, bit by bit,
And you don't even care.

You leave me alone
all by myself,
for some other "friends".

I have to find new friends
because of you,
What am I? An old doll?

You can't keep doing this
to people,
it's not right.

God have mercy on you
for shunning all those you "love",
I'll pray for you every night.

What happened to my best friend?
She left me long ago,
for "newer" and "better" people.

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Written August 30th, 2006

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  • Kari gold member
    September 5, 2006
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    Great Job!

    This was a very very very deep write and penned very good...thanks for sharing your feelings with us.

    Kari
    Your killing me inside
    little by little, bit by bit,
    And you don't even care.