I come home to find you spread out on our bed,
your long blonde hair resting on your beautiful ass.
So gorgeous and sensual from head to toe,
your luscious red lips blow inviting kisses my way.
I drop my briefcase as my jaw hits the floor,
take off my pants and kick off my shoes.
Just the sight of you lying there sends burning sensations,
throughout my body and down to my growing manhood.
You are just a foot away from me,
yet I stumble trying to reach you on the bed.
You jump up and quickly grab my hand saving me,
slowly you bring your lips toward mine.
We lock and kiss so passionately,
as my hands begin to roam along your beautiful body.
I lower my hands to your knees and spread your legs wide open,
slowly I enter you leaving you breathless and in awe.
The scent of your hair and perfume are so sweet,
how you captivate me with every breath that I take.
I whisper words of love into your little ear,
as my thrusts become more powerful and frequent.
I look into your mesmerizing emerald green eyes,
always leaving me hypnotized and lost in you.
I can never get enough of you my darling,
I adore you so much more than you could ever know.
You push me off of you and throw me down,
my back hits the bed as you stroke and tease my cock.
Your firm hands grab a hold of my aching member,
slowly you swallow me leaving me in a state of ecstasy, over and over again.
Your breasts so soft, as I begin to lick them all over,
I watch as your eyes roll back into your head.
I bring my hands around to your back and squeeze your ass,
as we climax and collapse on top of each other.
We look into each other’s eyes and smile,
In our hearts we know that this is meant to be.
I want you to know that I will be yours forevermore,
I will always love you, and I thank you for loving me.
Author notes
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this piece!
Written September 5th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Sexual Experience by cali951.
300 points, ended May 18, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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1300 points, ended August 18, 2007, 49 entries
Honorable mention
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Honorable mention
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Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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thank for letting me read the poem...hopefully i get to love you..lol....j/k
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If I keep reading your writes I'm going to have to get my toy out tonight
I love this 
You push me off of you and throw me down,
my back hits the bed as you stroke and tease my cock.
Your firm hands grab a hold of my aching member,
slowly you swallow me leaving me in a state of ecstasy, over and over again.
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I love how much love as well as pure amazing erotic there is to this poem.
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Wow this was hot, Excellent Erotic write, Nothing like coming home and having some hot sex. Good images and descriptions. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Mmmmmm...
What can I say. This was erotic, sensual, passionate, sexual, lustful and everything else in between. Loved it. thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
Sunshine
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wowzers love that picture, and this is one hell of a hot piece I love every single movement.... love this way too much
Riftkin -
Well I have read a lot of great poems and I wanted the finalist pick the winners.....now I'm not saying I want you to read every finalist but if you could read some poems and let me know if you think you should win let me know also thansk
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Hot Hot Hot
Wow so passionate and incrediable write. I had to read it twice. You had my attention thoughout the poem. Thank you for sharing. Love the Picture awesome.
(LISA)
"Your breasts so soft, as I begin to lick them all over,
I watch as your eyes roll back into your head.
I bring my hands around to your back and squeeze your ass,
as we climax and collapse on top of each other."
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I want to say thanks for everyone that entered my contest it was very hard to judge this contest because the poems were all good and i loved reading them.I had a blast reading them good job and to the people who didnt win you all did a great job.
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You are very welcome, it's my pleasure!
Thank you for holding it!
Jeremy0826
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I really like this poem especially the way you expressed your words this is just amamzing to my suprise im almost at a lost for words my favorite line is "how you captivate me with every breath that I take" i like it because of the way you expressed it good luck in my contest and good job
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Heated passion and lots of it. Nicely done! Good luck in the contest! ~Sie
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I have got to read more of your poetry, this was a mind blower for sure. Very well done in so many ways.
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Blew My Mind...
Whoa...I.am.speechless.
I feel like....
Um I better shut up
Very sensual write...made my heart race....
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Daaaaammmmmnnnn!!! I cannot say I have read one like by you.. that was so deep and erotic.. I mean this was just.. whew.. Awesome my dear friend. Made my blood boil a little..(But I should be okay...in a couple days.. LOL)
Love
~Krys~
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Thank you sweety!
Jeremy
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Wow this poem was intense and very explicit. Great write
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Thank you very much Dolly Dearest! I appreciate it!
Jeremy0826
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Hello Amanda! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on this one. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Take care and have a wonderful day!
Jeremy -
very sexy read
I love how you write this with such passion, lust and love ... beautiful to read
Very sensual and sexy ... you certainly know how to express your desires well ...
Great flow all through-out with a gorgeous ending of love ...
Keep writing
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Thank you Acytra, I am glad that you liked it!
I appreciate your comments on this one!
Jeremy -
Wow how incredible!!! Excellent poem and totally sexy. Vivid and hot. Thanks!! Whew!! Man....great poem.
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Thank you so much Joyce, I appreciate it!
I am glad that you liked this one.
Jeremy -
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this Cinnarry, I appreciate it!
Jeremy -
passionate, sexy, hot, and loving what more could anyone ask for.
a very well written piece of poetry you have here.
great read, interesting and done in wonderful taste.
i enjoyed.
joyce
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Very sensual and erotic in very good taste. i will read this one over and over again, it awakens the senses and allows for a nice day-dreamy thought Thanks for sharing this with us
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Hey Spunky!
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this one.
I appreciate the applause also!
Jeremy -
Awwwwwww what a sweet way to end this heated erotica poem! Shewwww gave me some hot thinking flashes(of my special someone,lol) and smiling reading it! You do a really fine job here with your erotica writing and you have my applause!! WTG!
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Thank you Angel!
Jeremy -
Jeremy this is a very good write that you had penned here
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Thank you so much Luna!
I appreciate your comments here.
Have a great one!
Jeremy -
Well Done
Amazing, it was so well put together, not to revealing but just enough to get ones heart up. *sigh* I loved it! I am glad I decided to check it out..^^
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Thank you Kiran, I appreciate your thoughts and comments on this piece!
Jeremy -
A very passionate, tender and loving write! This was beautifully expressed! Well done with this piece.
Kiran -
An interesting poem...a little too much for me I have to say, but I'm sure people who like this style will like it as you've carried it off very well. Good flow, even in the choice of language was a touch too much for my personal tastes. An expression of love, so it did live up to the title...well done :-)
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expressive
Well this isn't a poem I should have read coming home to an empty bed.....Sigh! Good write.. at least someone is in love
Enjoy this feeling.. enjoy! Good expressive write.
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Thank you so much Angel!
Jeremy -
lol No, I haven't been taking any hints from you two! This is actually a poem that I wrote two weeks ago. I finally had the time to post it today. Thanks for your comments and for stopping in to read this! I appreciate it Jeannie. Have a great one!
Jeremy -
MmmmMmmmm good!
Very tastefully done with just enough HOT to melt one's knees!
I love it!
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You been taking hints from James and I?
Great writing, sounds like an exciting evening to me. Well done! Jeannie D Hunter
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Thank you so much Joyce, it's always great to hear from you my friend! Have a great one!
Jeremy -
well, well, well what a awesome piece of poetry.
an outstanding job you have done here.
i love poem that are full of love.
you have done a wonderful job.
i'm glad i checked it out.
joyce
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LOL! Lane, thanks so much for taking the time to read this.
I appreciate your comments on this one!
Jeremy -
Thank you Tom!
Jeremy -
Gee whiz...I just read Vicky's poem and now this! Are my cheeks red?? I'm sure they are. I think I peeked too long...
Love,
Lane
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Obviously a man in love. Also a man who is well loved. Great! Tom B.
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Thank you Dawn!
I appreciate it.
Jeremy -
wow.. this was awesome.. so passionate and man that was just amazing.. great job!!
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Thank you Sweet-Loving!
I am glad that you liked this one.
I appreciate your comments and applause here.
Jeremy -
Hey Supertzar! I love your name, it's really unique.
Thanks a lot for your thoughts and comments on this. I appreciate it!
Jeremy -
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on this. I am glad that you liked it!
Jeremy -
wonderful
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beautiful
I don't really know what to say. I haven't read something like this in a long time. The imagery was perfect, I could picture it all...and it wasn't sleazy, it was just beautiful. You could tell that it is love and not lust persay. I like that. True love lives on!
Awesome.
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excellent
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I am beside myself with this. Jealous even. breathtakingly wonderful. indeed a great read. Thanks.
Victoria -
Thank you Soulful, I appreciate it!
Jeremy -
Whew...need some ice in my drink...lol This was so, so, so sensuous...Beautiful imagery and the words were so discriptive.
Wonderful work..Thanks for sharing...
Soulful Woman -
SmudgeInk, thank you so much for your comments and thoughts on this one, I appreciate it!
Jeremy -
nice,I looked at the newest poems list and yours was at the top,I read and was left breathless.How beautiful to write something like this.Your writting something personal and deep.This is very descriptive and nice.Good job.Keep writting
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