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Zen's Beliefs

The power of the mind is deadly,
if you know how to use it.

Complex as it might be,
opening your mind to new things is always easy.

Untapped power is locked away,
but with the right timing,
you can release a chaotic level of energy
that is devastating to everyone around you.

With your mind,
you can be at two places at once &
won't get tired.

Relax your mind to a level of peace
that no one can touch cuz if you don't,
you'll go crazy.

Seeing is believing,but never let your eyes trick you.
Most images that you see is false.

Before you can trust anyone,
you need to first trust yourself.

There's no such thing as "Trust No One" cuz in life,
you will need to trust somebody.

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Open your mind.
Written September 5th, 2006

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  • Poetrybird86
    July 25, 2008

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    My first impression is that this will be a poem that makes you think and it does but for me its more of looking at life through someone else's eyes. It's a good poem and it speak thruth about many things, some of which others may find hard to do.


  • Kiran silver member
    September 6, 2006
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    you've written a thought provoking poem. Really well done. I loved this
    Kiran