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Tears of Solitude





Callous tongue;
            slicing deep to the core






Passion's flame;
               asphyxiating on umbraging actions






Wretched soul;
               brewing tears of solitude






Erratic thoughts;
           illuminating paths to self destruction






Verbal stoning;
          fracturing the shell of romantic ideals






Wilting emotions;
             birthing petals of numbness






Contaminated arrows;
                        abandoning Love's Messiah









Author notes

word bank:

Asphyxiate     messiah     umbraged     stoned     abandon

Illuminate     callous     shell      erratic    contaminate



Written September 5th, 2006

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  • Kari gold member
    September 11, 2006
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    Deep

    This was very deep...you did a good job. The best of luck to you in the contest!

    Kari


  • luckynsincere
    September 11, 2006
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    Bel, Holy hell. This is AWESOME! Needless to say I know that pic, for it is JADE from America's next Top Model. I hated her. lol. This poem... wow. I am astonished by the powerful affect it has left upon me. The line breaks or space in between the sentences have an airy feel. As if you had paused for time to allow the reader to ponder. Wonderfully done sweet girl!!
    Mel


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    September 5, 2006
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    Awesome write Sis. you have left me stunned with your words. Great job!


    Lil Bro


  • Nadelle
    September 5, 2006
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    First WOW what a picture. looooooove it. second you picked hard words for that wordbank. No easier choices? either way. NICE poem. just absolutly wonderful i read it twice...aloud. clap clap clap anyway. keep it up. woot!


  • jacks insanity
    September 5, 2006
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    befuddled

    i admit, i am confused-- maybe you just tried to hard


  • gullionmar
    September 5, 2006
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    well written,from word bank


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    September 5, 2006
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    Oooh sister Bel!
    Girl, you always blow me away with your awesome writing and this is certainly NO exception!
    Awesome! Rock on, gf! Rock on!


  • Celticmoon
    September 5, 2006
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    Yes I did double it up


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    September 5, 2006
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    Very nice.. why does it have a wordbank though for this contest?

    jess

    ooh you doubled up haveing to write for another challenge. Clever.
    Edited on Sep 05, 12:21 because 'I got it now..'.

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