I stand before you today,
in front of God and all creation,
to profess my undying love for you and only you.
(Name), as we join hands this day,
let it be a symbol of our joined hearts;
an eternal beating in unison.
Through our hands,
may our souls unite, for love, forever.
When skies turn grey, remember (Name),
you have my hand;
together we will find the light.
At times, when things may seem down,
please always remember,
my hand will help lift you back up.
And when the air is filled with peace and perfection,
our hands, entwined with our love,
make stronger each bright ray.
(Name), I take your hand within my heart,
My vow, your side I shall not part.
I take this hand with the good and bad,
Rich or poor, happy or sad.
I take your hand for life and love,
Joined in union, blessed by God above.
On your hand, I place this ring from me,
A perfect circle, symbols of eternity.
Author notes
Written September 5th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Battle of the sexes 2 - Wedded Bliss(Contest) by forever dreaming.
300 points, ended September 14, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks hun, your comments are most appreciated.
Storm -
Storm this is great
Beautiful imagery of the moment
Combined with sincere wording
Adrian -
Thank you for your much appreciated comment.
Storm -
Oh this is great and I can tell why there were tears in eyes. It is a beautiful, emotional write and we wish you good luck in our contest.
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Thank you Anne, and yes I know. Here too as I was writing it. Appreciate your comments hun.
Storm -
omg storm this is so beautiful!
a tear in my eyes right now, you know why
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