Not a memory of your face,
No clue of your identity,
Yet still you take away my dignity,
No spoken words, Not even a sound,
Suddenly I've fallen,
No pushed, and then i hit the ground.
A stagnant smell, a bitter taste,
Need to get away, no time to waste,
Your hands all over me, please don't touch,
I didn't ask for this, I hate you so much.
You've totally scared me, filled me with pain
You can't be a man, you're far too lame,
You should be locked up and put in a cell,
But then my story I'll have to tell, of a man i don't know,
Have i seen you around? So why did you push me to the ground?
You're a rapist you see and you're raping me!
Why?
I have no answers, still don't know,
Don't think I've ever felt so low.
Can I get my dignity back?
What difference will it make?
It wasn't there for you to take.
So on you walk free as a bird, me, I can't speak, won't say a word,
Will have to go on with this fear in my mind, and one day,
My dignity I'm sure I'll find.
A contest entry
- Make me cry....options =] and PW allowed :D by LeilaJayne.
900 points, ended May 17, 2008, 33 entries
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Wow your poem was very powerful. i like the way your poem flowed a lot of poems i have read now a days are all free writes i liked the ryhming. thanks for entering. good luck and god bless
*amanda* -
heartfelt
i love this piece because i feel you put alot of emotion into it and i am very glad you chose to enter my contest. good luck!
Jane -
A unique amd touchine piece. i love the structure and the way it sounds so honest.
good luck with the contest -
a unique and touching piece, i love the structure and how it sounds so strong. thank you.
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those were very kind words thankyou!
its wonderful to get such great comments from a writer as talented as yourself really truly thankyou!
jayjay x -
Haunting
This is a haunting piece!! I love the structure you built these words around, very unique. Your pain is brimming over in these emotive lines. I'm so sorry for you darling. I can totally understand your pain. You are completely right, you HAVE maintained your dignity! I just wrote a piece on dignity about a week or so ago, as it will be the one thing I'll take with me when I die. No one can strip us of our dignity, no matter how they rob us. Great write!! Keep writing!!
~Lori~ -
I'm so sorry you had the experience that. You did a fabulous job expressing your feelings towards what happened. Thank you for entering the contest, and good luck !
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