Sun shine upon my face
where are the lies
they've all come to fade
come little hopes
and come little dreams
turn the sunshine into screams.
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Written September 4th, 2006
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Nicely worded i really enjoyed it
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idk i felt disturbed at the time haha
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Oh my. Wow, that started so nice and just turned so violent. It wsa actually kind of disturbing in a way. Good job I had an emotional reaction from that.
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this is a good poem, it's short but I like it.
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idk... i was depressed...haha for like asecond
yeah im on my period
even htough i odnt usually get moody becuase of my period idk maybe im jsut using it as an excuse
i lvoe you -
i love you.. and this is really good but makes me a worry a lil..anyway i love you sooooooo much.. if i could i make all the pain go away
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Wow, that was....different than I expected from the title.
But I liked it!
Short and to-the-point.
Great poem.
Love and light,
Jenna
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