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Adventure time.

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I raised a four son brood, passing on my knowledge of life,
but divorced and free as a bird, I am lonely without a wife.
Now it’s time to hit the road while leaving the past behind,
a new life is before me now and many adventures to find.


My hair is turning grey and they seem to multiply so fast,
I’m ready to enjoy what’s left, without dwelling on the past.
The work is done and time for fun, to enjoy what I can find,
to recharge a body tired and sore and a quite weary mind.


Winnebago full to the brim with more comforts than home,
following roads Henry and Banjo, long ago used to roam.
Recalling their words vivid and true, living it as it was told,
tastes of an inherited past while watching it slowly unfold.


Open road ahead, comfortable bed and packet of Billy Tea,
doing things from boyhood dreams, so many sights to see.
Singing aloud new sights appear, the wind blows in my hair,
freedom is mine to tour entranced, without worry or a care.


I’ll admire nature’s work, while exploring this timeless land,
along lush narrow coastal plains or the burning desert sand,
Where ancestors battled and died, for a tough hard won life,
I’ll give ‘em a cheer for enduring, many hardships and strife.


Campfires at night with new friends, under stars we admire,
aroma of beef, onions and snags, over a still smoldering fire.
With spuds in jackets baked in coals, wood turning light grey,
hot damper and jam sipping Billy tea, is there a better way ?


This is the way I’ll spend my days, until I can drive no more,
through good times or tough, whatever destiny has in store.
I’ll drive along singing a song, with a smile creasing my face,
guessing what I’ll find as I drive happily on to the next place.



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  • Whoochi gold member
    August 26, 2007

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    Oh this sounds most excellent my friend..just traveling the open road sounds wonderful..the rhyme is splendid...best of luck!


  • Sally the Ragdoll
    August 25, 2007

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    Wonderful imagery... it's so easy to picture you driving from holiday spot to holiday spot, having the time of your life. Wonderful write! Good luck in the contest!

    -Sally


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 22, 2007
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    BRAVVVVOOO you penned a dream that I can only wish for,time on the road and no one to answer too,but the good Lord above, love it!!

    Bravo..


  • quantumsurveyor
    August 22, 2007

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    How do you do it my friend - or should that be fiend? What I like about this is the simple happy life (you hope) that is envisaged in your Lotto win. Good on yer Cobblers as we say over here in PomLand. By the way what are snags and dampers - just wondered not being the old Billabong as you might say. Worthy winner I hope.
    Donald


  • lucy sky-diamond
    April 18, 2007

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    a very well rhymed piece, and the flow is put togther with great flair. i can find no faults, and i like your origioanl take on the idea of 'holidays'. thank you very much for this fine entry, and best of luck in the contest
    lucy


  • A falling star
    March 17, 2007

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    I like this. It's interesting. I don't know, driving around when you don't have anything to tie you down seems pretty fun. A great way to pass time.
    Thank you for entering my contest.

  • Son of Jim
    September 20, 2006
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    Bazza
    this was quite the interesting personal, narrative. You rhymed well and your quatrain format kept the strength of the poem going.


  • Bazza
    September 20, 2006
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    Thank you for the applause and kind words. I appreciate your taking the time to comment and I thank you for your good wishes ..I hope you enjoy some of my other poems too.


  • forever dreaming
    September 20, 2006
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    Great piece of writing that I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the adventure.


  • Angels Delight
    September 19, 2006
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    Honey...

    I haven't dropped by one of your poems in such a long time and I feel absolutely terrible about it but I promise to make a point of dropping by more often and you be safe out there and have the time of your life...

    Much Love
    Tessa


  • Sandygram
    September 19, 2006
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    WONDERFUL

    It was sooooooooooooooooooooooo nice to hear from you my friend. Sounds like you are going to have a blast on the road. So much beautiful country to to take a drive about. You always make me smile when I get your emails. You ytake care, I miss you. Can't wait to chat again. Love, Sandy Hugs

  • Bazza
    September 17, 2006
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    Be on the road soon but at present I am in a dead spot and unable to receive or send. See ya soon. I have to travel 40 km where I am at present for a few minutes. Please send me details on how to purchase one of your books.


  • WelshDragon
    September 17, 2006
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    Welcome back my friend. Hope you are well.... Talk soon
    Bob

  • Mother Angst
    September 9, 2006
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    great

    go for the gusto! sounds like youve earned it! great write, by the way!

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Ros I will be in contact more soon, nearly ready to hit the road, but at present I am living in a dead spot and cant receive or transmit. (wireless internet that uses mobile phone network but expensive and short time online) if you can send me your email address to bazthompson@bigpond.com, I can message you there by prewriting my emails before logging on.

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Thanks mate .. you know the only the only people I see with corks tied to their hats to keep away the flys are Aussie tourists in England !! lol Thanks for the kind words .. Can you send your email address to bazthompson@bigpond.com pleas so I can prewrite them before logging on as I have restricted time online.

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Thanks Princess, will have to chat by prewritten email so please email me your address again because I gave my old computer to the grandkids.


  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Send me the link and I will read it and comment. Thanks for the lovely comment

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    A great life in a great country and the only terrorists I am likely to come across in my travel are the ones who wear blue unitorms and have sirens on their vehicles ...


  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Thanks love, replies will be very short but I will try to maintain the personal touch.

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    I am hoping this will be a permanent way of life and I will be in touch with all my wonderful AP friends and family.

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Staying at a dead spot at present and due to go on the road soon. I have wireless internet but it is expensive . Thanks for the lovely comments

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Sweet poetryman, I have shifted in and will be daily online (briefly) because I have wireless internet which is charged by time but will do my best
    Ready to go on the road but at present staying in a dead spot where I have no signal. See you soon .

  • Bazza
    September 9, 2006
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    Dear Sandy, I have shifted in and will be daily online (briefly) because I have wireless internet which is charged by time but will do my best
    Ready to go on the road but at present staying in a dead spot where I have no signal. See you soon my Sweet.


  • Gwenevere
    September 6, 2006
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    Wishing you all the luck in the world.Miss you loads, Ros


  • Legend silver member
    September 5, 2006
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    Bazza what a jolly swag-man you are.I think it is mans destiny to always needing to be on the move.How i wish i were a fellow traveler.But i guess this will have to be done by proxy with your words Great write and a most enjoyable read
    Edited on Sep 05, 5:02 p.m. because ''.

  • Ir.muse
    September 5, 2006
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    hi my lovely daddy

    You're back I'm glad to have you back here and I'm glad that you're enjoying your time there.
    Love you

    Your Princess

  • lifesymbiotic
    September 5, 2006
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    WOW! what a great write,I just want to get on my bike and dissapear into wonderous oblivion after reading this,I wish you a happy adventure and a smooth road!.If you have time I'd love your opinion on my poem city spell,as I think it's the opposite world of the one your poem conveyed to me...Big love lifesymbiotic


  • wtchr
    September 5, 2006
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    Thanks for checking in. It's GOOD to hear from you. Loved the freedom expressed in your poem and the earned freedom you can now enjoy. I envy you greatly, both your abilities as a writer and free soul. Take care, write soon, G'day mate.


  • urehooked
    September 5, 2006
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    Awe this is excellent Bazza and there's nothing better than the open road and just driving away stopping when you feel it,going to nowhere exactly in mind.I hope you have a great trip my friend and im hoping to read more great poems/stories of your travels my friend.Kenny


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 4, 2006
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    This sounds like an ideal way to spend some time travelling with other like souls - wosh you many happy miles motoring...


  • September 4, 2006
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    I love this poem. It is always fun going camping and being on the road. My grandparents go in their motor home 6 months out of the year and travel all over the USA.. It is a nice experience and you are lucky that you have the oppurtunity to do so. Best of luck on the road and where your travels take you. Great poem. All4hugs


  • WisdomWarrior
    September 4, 2006
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    I hope this doesn't mean we won't be enjoying your poetry anymore. Hopefully you will stop by the local cyber cafe every once in a while and share.

    Nice piece.

    John


  • Swtpoetryman
    September 4, 2006
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    KEEP ON TRUCKIN, DUDE!

    I'm DELIGHTED to hear that you ON THE ROAD, Mate! It sounds like a wonderful, beautiful, and marvelous way to enjoy the rest of your days whatever may come along the way! It sounds like FUN to me and something that I may do, too - when I retire IF it is in MY FATHERS plans for me! Pack up me laptop, cameras, guitars, flip-flops, jeans, sneakers, favorite books, leather jacket, T's, sweaters, and jeans and maybe one good suit for special occasions (LOL!!) and yes some fine BRITISH TEA and a few cold brewskies, too! It all sounds like A JOLLY GOOD TIME to me! I hope your adventure goes as smoothly as this wonderful poem flows BUT even if it doesn't remember that getting there is half the fun and what it's al;l about!! Perhaps ,I'll meet you one day on the road, my friend! Thanks SO MUCH for featuring this fine ODE to the road - for sadly i would have missed it today!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.

  • Sandygram
    September 4, 2006
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    WONDERFUL

    Oh, This was so nice to read Barry. I have missed your poetry. It sounds like you are really going to enjoy yourself.I am happy for you. It has been so nice to read what an adventure it will be. You and the open road with a pretty Shela in every town. You go and enjoy yourself. Think of me sitting around a campfire somenight. I will be writing my poetry and thinking of all the smiles you sent me when I needed them. I will think of you too and look for you on here when you can get on. You take care of yourself and enjoy. You so deserve it. My prayers are always with you. Take care, Sandy

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