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Misunderstand Me

When tears are venomous acid
Spreading loss like wildfire
Throughout my entire being

When time ticks only forward
Away the breath of existence
Leaving mind numbing pain

When misunderstandings are wounds
Slashing wide cavernous rifts
In my depths of love

When words are unbearable blows
Pounding in reverberation
To the core of my soul

When thoughts are torturous
Lingering and unmerciful
Over the mistakes made

When sleep is divine
A rhythmic escape
From the enemy that is Now.

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Written September 4th, 2006

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