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Single Decibel Heartbeat



      I crave the subtle moonlight like the shadow craves the sun.

      I try to be creative with the problems left undone,

      but nighttime comes

      in single sums

      and I'm still left with one.




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anybody else want what they can't have?
Written September 4th, 2006

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  • Creatress
    October 18, 2006
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    Yes!!! Everything I want seems to be out of reach...a place where creativity is useless because its irrelevant to the goal or need. The desire is impossible to satiate. Great piece that has me thinking.

    ~~Creatress~~

  • honeybe
    September 5, 2006
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    yes. i think its a "normal" human reaction to being told/knowing you cant have something/one. later Honeybe