I am a cookie monster
Are you a monster too?
I eat cookies all day long
And live in a cookie zoo.
I'm a blue and furry thing
Some say I make a mess
But when it comes to cookies
It's the truth, I must confess.
Big or small, I don't care
Circles here, circles there
Cookies are calling out
Circles, circles everywhere.
I am a cookie monster
And they say you will be three
So have a great big cookie
And a birthday wish from me.
Happy Birthday Daniel
Author notes
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Written September 4th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- poems or stories that little kids would like (a happy birthday contest for my little brother) by little-hug.
400 points, ended September 17, 2006, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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A birthday wish was sent to make her brother smile. But glad that it brought joy to more than just the birthday boy.
Thank you for the comments
Storm -
Dear poetess
I know little hug
who does love this
a Pixielander everyone loves
fulfilling my familial bliss.
AT -
Thank you for the comments, it's most appreciated.
Storm -
I am so glad he enjoyed it. I love working with kids, they are so precious. I hope he enjoyed his birthday, or will enjoy it.
Many hugs
Autumn -
Congratulations for winning gold in this awesome contesst. Can imagine a three year old who loves Cookie Monster might have fallen in love with this poem.
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Just wanted to say Daniel absoloutely loves this !! He adores the cookie monster background and the cookie monster holding the cake picture too. I think it made him feel very special. I want to say thank you again so much for taking the time to enter ! ♥ and thank you for making my little brother smile
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Thanks hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
great write baby! Made me smile.
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Thank you hun, for the comments
Storm
Edited on Sep 04, 3:48 p.m. because 'I need to stop answering 3 people at once, lol'. -
A cute poem Storm, brings back memories of sesame street and many other early morning shows. Brought a smile to my face and I know my godson ( age 4 ) would love it
Good luck in the contest
Adrian -
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I have a little one, well not so little anymore, as he is 9, but I remember the Sesame Street, Barny, Teletubbies, Bear, and so much more days. I know what those shows meant to him as a young one. I hope your brother enjoys his big day, and that you do too. Be kind to him, he loves you even if he can get a little funky every now and then.
Storm
Edited on Sep 04, 3:34 p.m. because 'My brain is floating somewhere else besides my head'. -
Thanks hun, much appreciated.
Storm -
Aww wow this is so sweet and thoughtful and sooo well written ! I know Daniel will love it
The background and picture are so perfect too
I love how this rhymes and flows and the beautiful simplicity of the lanuage means I know Daniel will love it as much as I do
I have to admit that even though I made this contest for my little brother's birthday I think I will enjoy all the poems and stories in it as much as or even more than him
thank you so much for entering
lots of luck always
ellie
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Awwww totally cute, sweet, and adorable write! I loved this, sweetie!
All the best to you and yours,
Sandy
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