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A Monsterous Birthday Wish

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I am a cookie monster
Are you a monster too?
I eat cookies all day long
And live in a cookie zoo.

I'm a blue and furry thing
Some say I make a mess
But when it comes to cookies
It's the truth, I must confess.

Big or small, I don't care
Circles here, circles there
Cookies are calling out
Circles, circles everywhere.

I am a cookie monster
And they say you will be three
So have a great big cookie
And a birthday wish from me.

Happy Birthday Daniel

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Written September 4th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 2, 2006
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    A birthday wish was sent to make her brother smile. But glad that it brought joy to more than just the birthday boy.

    Thank you for the comments
    Storm

  • Abdul T Alishtari
    October 2, 2006
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    Dear poetess

    I know little hug
    who does love this
    a Pixielander everyone loves
    fulfilling my familial bliss.

    AT

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 17, 2006
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    Thank you for the comments, it's most appreciated.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 17, 2006
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    I am so glad he enjoyed it. I love working with kids, they are so precious. I hope he enjoyed his birthday, or will enjoy it.

    Many hugs
    Autumn

  • grannyeri gold member
    September 17, 2006
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    Congratulations for winning gold in this awesome contesst. Can imagine a three year old who loves Cookie Monster might have fallen in love with this poem.

  • little-hug
    September 17, 2006
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    Just wanted to say Daniel absoloutely loves this !! He adores the cookie monster background and the cookie monster holding the cake picture too. I think it made him feel very special. I want to say thank you again so much for taking the time to enter ! ♥ and thank you for making my little brother smile

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 4, 2006
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    Thanks hun, appreciate it.

    Storm
  • Trackrules
    September 4, 2006
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    great write baby! Made me smile.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 4, 2006
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    Thank you hun, for the comments

    Storm
    Edited on Sep 04, 3:48 p.m. because 'I need to stop answering 3 people at once, lol'.

  • WarrioroftheHeart
    September 4, 2006
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    A cute poem Storm, brings back memories of sesame street and many other early morning shows. Brought a smile to my face and I know my godson ( age 4 ) would love it
    Good luck in the contest

    Adrian

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 4, 2006
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    Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I have a little one, well not so little anymore, as he is 9, but I remember the Sesame Street, Barny, Teletubbies, Bear, and so much more days. I know what those shows meant to him as a young one. I hope your brother enjoys his big day, and that you do too. Be kind to him, he loves you even if he can get a little funky every now and then.

    Storm
    Edited on Sep 04, 3:34 p.m. because 'My brain is floating somewhere else besides my head'.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 4, 2006
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    Thanks hun, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • little-hug
    September 4, 2006
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    Aww wow this is so sweet and thoughtful and sooo well written ! I know Daniel will love it The background and picture are so perfect too I love how this rhymes and flows and the beautiful simplicity of the lanuage means I know Daniel will love it as much as I do I have to admit that even though I made this contest for my little brother's birthday I think I will enjoy all the poems and stories in it as much as or even more than him thank you so much for entering lots of luck always
    ellie

  • Heavenly Angel
    September 4, 2006
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    Awwww totally cute, sweet, and adorable write! I loved this, sweetie!
    All the best to you and yours,
    Sandy
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