Eyes Of Stone
As I am caught up
In the ripples of exhaustion
I look into your eyes of stone
And wonder if I can ever come home
I’m nothing to you
A burden
A wreck
So do it
Go on
Slide that noose ‘round my neck
Trying to find
Some peace of mind
Don’t you crush what you’ve destroyed
Its done, its gone, its dead, its buried
Stripped of my innocence
Bleed, bleed like me
I’ve needed you here
But you’ve never been there for me
I call to you but I hear no reply
You left me here but I’m wondering why
I guess I’ve been blind
Coz I’m livin a lie.
Pack up!
Go home!
Just leave me to die
Trying to find
Some peace of mind
Don’t you crush what you’ve destroyed
Its done, its gone, its dead, its buried
Stripped of my innocence
Bleed, bleed like me
Screams of frustration
As you seal my damnation
The steady flowing tears of blood
All because you misunderstood
I’m sick of this shit!
I’m done!
Let go!
And I tumble down
To the depths below
Trying to find
Some peace of mind
Don’t you crush what you’ve destroyed
Its done, its gone, its dead, its buried
Stripped of my innocence
Bleed, bleed like me
It’s a crying shame
It’s a dying shame
That you can’t hear me
But I’m SCREAMIN YOUR NAME!
Trying to find
Some peace of mind
Don’t you crush what you’ve destroyed
Bleed, bleed like me
Bleed like me
Bleed like me
Bleed like me
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Written September 4th, 2006
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Honey. i've gone through the same things you have. Is it like this... You have Somebody who loves you. and he Ends up treating you like a peice of shit because he thinks he can get what he wants, whenever he wants it, just because you are Loving? TRUST ME! if all that is true. then i've been through the same things. Don't Worry about him. you'll slowly Recover.
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i found this very difficult to read because the background made me paranoid.hahahaha.very good though. not much more to say i see all the words have been stolen from me.....i wish people comented on my shit like this.....stop looking at me..
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this is the greatest rant i have ever read
the poet has done it to me for real. usually i find something in a poem like this and there is usually some forgiveness in it. but the stones of eyes tell it all. bleed like me bleed like me. this is a poem about the need to not forgive, to not give back anything but the scars...giving back scars is very brave, it is a tru act of great self esteem. Here the poet forgives herself and goes one. just beatiful. this is just beautiful.,,,Danni
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hey yeah thanx 4 that, typo. and ur probably right thanx 4 the tip
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question: should (round mi neck) be round my neck?, & if your meaning to say someting 3X's eg.(Bleed like me (x3).)It is better for those of us reading to go ahead & write it three times so we feel more the effect you want. Because the human minds sees 3x's & stops there. Very powerful poem I loved the message you are conveying here. Keep up the good work I enjoyed it very much.
~Ron~
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hey thanx, actually ja, i did write it as a song.
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deep
wow. that is very deep and emotional. that would make a cool song.........wow.
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