show me love from all the stars above
show me love.
is love when there is two people?
show me love so i know what you mean.
show me love because every time i see it i think it is fake i think
i wish i had shown you love
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Written September 4th, 2006
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I agree with Kelly... this one was a lot better! I was nicely surprised!
It had a deep meaning too! Great job!!! Good Luck in the contest!
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you're getting better...but I still think you're capable of much much better work...this one had so much more meaning than all of your others which is definitely an acomplishment, since poetry's all about meaning, but just remember spellcheck and proofreading...but still, keep trying, you'll be great in time!!! keep writing so you can improve!!!
<3 always,
K-Jo -
this is from my hart!
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