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Mirror on the Wall

What a lonly gaze
For such beatiful eyes
Over looking a future caught in a needle
Where the more you see
The less it comes to be

Such steady hands,
To carry such a dream
The reflection of purpose
But a wreck to be made

Stain your heart in tears
But never touch another soul
Imagination brings only pain
Where reality comes to kill

You wonder what is better
An emptiness in time
Or death without regret

But now you see your future
And so you turn your head
Now you see your purpose
But soon youll be dead

Now the mirror is broken
And from your chains release
What weightless abandonment
To find true love's peace

Now you see the waters
And you are where you belong
Your breaths are disapearing
But your love remains strong

Free from your reflection
Your heart soars to Heaven

Your first glance to be your last
A beauty none can take away

Now you smile
And the rains pour down

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Not yet finished or edited for mistakes.

Written September 4th, 2006

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  • Keith Drew gold member
    September 5, 2006
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    Wonderful

    Mirror mirror on the wall where is the love I so recall!
    Ah wonderful read Tangerine, your name reminds me of John Lennon and his Tangerine trees.
    Keep writing your verse is written with the ink of your heart.
    Edited on Sep 05, 11:46 because ''.

  • Cinnarry gold member
    September 4, 2006
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    Stunning!