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Until The Rising Sun

I can feel the air around you
Brush against me as you breathe
We hold each other close
In the winters perfect breeze

With tender kiss I say goodnight
And lay you down to sleep
We pull the soft covers tight
Entangled in our dreams

Staring back at me
You smile through my heart
I see a devil on one shoulder,
And an angel with a harp

The first one says in flames
We perish in the moment
Build up our emotions
With whom we feel the closest

The other says don't be afraid
How the night is still young
When all we can do is lay together
Until the rising sun

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Written September 4th, 2006

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  • When September Ends
    September 23, 2006
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    awe, this poem is so sweet. I must side with the angel on this one too i think, its such a sweet idea.


  • Osiris Ra
    September 13, 2006
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    Nice to see you're back... not as much as I would like, but awesome nonetheless.

  • becky123
    September 4, 2006
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    ah the devil and the angel. i think i'm agreeing with the angel this time around