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Doing So Much, For Love

Running,
Like the stallions in the sky.
Running so fast,
The world becomes my feet.

Screaming,
Screaming so loud,
All the air around me,
Becomes my blood.

Hopeing.
Hopeing so hard,
That the sun losses intensity
The moon no longers begins to rise

Crying.
Crying so hard,
The oceans overfloow
And the rivers burst at their banks.

And I do all this
For you
For life
For hope

For love...

Author notes

*I dont think I can spelling hope-ing*
Hope you like!!
Written September 4th, 2006

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  • NoMoreTears063
    October 14, 2006
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    wow

    Omg im sry to myself that it took me so long to read this.
    it is beautiful...and the pain is so real
    and i relate to this...
    its another beautiful piece of work!
    i love you
    and always will...
    im here 4 u 4 nething

    -Nicole


  • Emilia Ricks
    September 4, 2006
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    I really enjoyed this.. you have captured the true feeling love, the emotions we go through and what we would do, when its so true. Great work