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Worthless Prize

Left Alone for far too long,
Feelings dead that once were strong.

Fear of dieing with no one there
a rotting corpse with none to care

My soul feels lost against this life
the cost of loving too high a price

Why cant I find the man to be
someone who cares only for me

Am I such a worthless prize
in everybody elses eyes?

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Written September 3rd, 2006

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  • Asabouros.
    July 22, 2008

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    I think this is wonderfully writen, very expressive Some grammar may suffer in it, but otherwise it's...well, let's put it this way, I don't like rhyme, but I love this poem


  • nilav
    July 6, 2008
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    the words carry some strong emotions...good poem

  • batteredangel
    September 4, 2006
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    Great rhyming and structure.


  • inspire2dream
    September 4, 2006
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    Sad...

    sometimes love flies in on doves wings and then soars out with dark things..One must never give up on love, for when you least expect it I am sure that it will nock at ur door.