Would you like to two step
Dance with me around this floor
Polish our buckles
Sliding to and fro
Now save me a polka
So we can fly once more
We can do the loop dee loop
and walk dizzy from the floor.
Make sure I get the last waltz
I know that it's your favorite
I love the way your eyes glow
As the lights go passing by.
You know I'll dance any dance
When you are in my arms
So when you ask me my favorite
It is any with you and me alone
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I do like dancing and it is slowly come back to me. I don't have a girl friend yet, The ladies are just so young.
Written September 3rd, 2006
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excellent write
i just love this poem, charlie! brought back memories of when i was young!thank you for sharing this! -
Cute and thoughtful.......
i wonder if the line of polish our buckels
may be a little awkward to read........
it may just be me -
Loved It!!!
Holy Moly!!
Another dancer and romancer
Beautiful penned Masterpiece that can put a smile
on the Ladies faces
There are Gentlemen who can dance...
shake their bon bon
and then there is the combo of the two
who can show the Love that is strong~~
Kudos to You!!!
This was a lot of FUN to inhale
and I can envision You out there
on the floor...
(not planted on a seat watching with
two left feet)
-Not against anyone with two left feet mind You-
(had to put that disclaimer in)
Look forward to reading more
-dances back to page-
Many blessings to You
Thank You for the visit to my world!!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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WONDERFUL
This was awesome Charle. Made me smile remembering your stories about dancing with the young girls. You keep at it and you will get the hang of it. I love the polka and here we go loopty loo, here we go loopty li All on a satutday night. You bring back the good memories. Take care. Thank you for the smiles.
Sandy
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Wonderful!!!
I just love this!!! I think you need to have a long conversation with your dancin shoes or tell them you're getting some new ones to go with that new more "mature" girlfriend who will dance in delight within your arms!! (She maybe just around that corner ) Your poem is really a wonderful write, I really enjoyed reading this!!! So you actual polka??? Boy do I have some family stories..
Have a beautiful day!!
Linda
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I love to dance, lol. But the guys i know "can't". Anyway, great write here, and tell your legs to keep movin'. lol.
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oh charlie you are so funny, this is very well written, i to love to dance haven't done so for a long time its so cool to read the things you write your a good writer and sound like areal ladies man.hope you've found her already lol take care mary
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I understand that, My legs have had several hateful conversations with me about my dancing, I just tell them to shut up and push it more the next time
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joyful write
Sounds like fun, Haven't done a Polka for a very long time. Kind of like me skating to night came back to me long enough for me to get brave and go out in the rink until I hurt my back side. Be sore from that a day or two. LOL
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