Nice try, dad.
You tried to break me,
You tried to make me cry,
Ha! I'm stronger than that.
Never here
Never there
Gone
Your cruel intentions
To never be a dad
To never be a husband
To never be a man
They have no affect on me
You make me hate you
But I don't want to
If you would just leave
If you would just never call
If you would just disapear
It would be easier not to
Hate you
I've seen what you can
Do to her
You made my mom cry
You made her hate herself
You made her feel sorry for me
Therefore, hating you is easy
I don't want to hate you dad
I want you to let us live
Our own life we have made
We left you
But you left us first
Don't follow
With clenched jaws
I write this
With cold blood
You read this
Just go home
Don't come again
Don't show your sorry face
Don't bring your stories of renewel
We don't believe you
Call once a month
That's all I want from you
Your money is not worth anything
Send your love once a year
In my birthday card
But don't oversend it
I don't like hating you dad
So don't make me.
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Written September 3rd, 2006
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Hey this is really good,
You left a comment on the "teen board" about Parents... that I wrote.. I know exactly how you feel,
its tough when your dad didnt care for so long and all of a sudden he is back...
great job on this,
its truely amazing! -
Wow, I can feel the hate spilling out of this piece. I've often felt this way, (I don't know my biological ftaher either) but I've come to let go of the hate.
Anyway, this piece is brilliant. You've done an excellent job of releasing your thoughts and emotions.
FallenPoeticAngel
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whoa.
straight from the feelings
splatted on the paper.
so intence.
great job -
BRILL!
That's very good! I like it!
The style is "different" to a lot of la dee da poems around and I like that! Woo!
I was interested and enthralled the whole way through and I did really enjoy it, and I don't say that to a lot ofpeople.
Your use of raw emotion is good and it felt very personal, but at the same time, very distant and I like that!
Well done! -
great job
wow... the emotion is so raw....it kinda gives this clenched- fist, pen-squeezing, lip-pursed feeling. i love it.
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