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A Mother's Prayer


Lord give me the strength to do all that I can,
To bring forth a healthy and happy child.
To help me give this child you entrusted to me,
All that they will need to make it through life.
May they learn to love life,
And be a good person to all mankind.
May they know the love of a loving family,
And love them in return.
May they grow into a responsible adult,
And do well in all they endeavor.
May they follow in thy light,
And know the peace and serenity of thy love.
AMEN

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Title #27
Written September 3rd, 2006

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  • freespirit51
    September 8, 2006
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    Thanks Misty for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it.


  • Misty Melody gold member
    September 7, 2006
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    An Awesome beautifully written prayer, Structure good flow very good. Totally enjoyed it, it was a precious poem very sweet and special. Thanks for sharing, Melody


  • freespirit51
    September 6, 2006
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    Thanks again rudolf for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it.

  • Rudolf
    September 6, 2006
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    I really like it

    This reminds me of the serentity prayer,very well put together. covers all of the bases....and then some ,keep on writing.rudolf


  • freespirit51
    September 4, 2006
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    Thanks Holdme for your wonderful comment. My family is very important to me.


  • freespirit51
    September 4, 2006
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    Thanks Angel for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.

  • HoldMe
    September 4, 2006
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    This is an awesome prayer, and definitely just very good, it's easy to see through it just how much you love your kids and want for them to do good in life. Anyways, this was just awesome!


  • wings of an angel
    September 3, 2006
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    This is a very good write that you had penned here your rhythm flowed beautifully I love the picture you had chosen good luck in my contest

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