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Inner Strength


What is it I see?
blasting in your heart
like sparks from a welding rod
lighting up the shadows all around

Ahh, the power of forgiveness
burning through
the layers of disappointment
creating a core of
unimaginable inner strength.


Author notes

For Baby, NWam, Head, or Delta. I'm not saying.
Written September 3rd, 2006

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  • Delta
    September 8, 2006
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    most eXcellent

    ; )

  • PerVirtuous gold member
    September 5, 2006
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    Well, NWam, this one is for ... I'll respod privately.
  • Lullabyhaven
    September 5, 2006
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    Puzzling

    This is a very intriguing write, full of mysteries and what have you's, I sure do hope, the mystery is solved soon...smile(refering
    to the comment section, of course)
    Edited on Sep 06, 1:02 because 'miss-spellings.'.

  • babys-no-angel
    September 3, 2006
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    whoa strong.. feel it deep inside. xxx