I walked into a restaurant,
And guess what they were serving?
I'm sure you would not like it,
As I thought it was disturbing!
For there sat a big old man,
Munching frozen meatloaf on a stick...
Had I seen it right? Yes,
I had to think quite quick!!!
I dove upon the table!
I threw the meatloaf out the door!
Then that weird old man started complaining,
He said he wanted some more!!!
I zoomed out of that resaurant...
As quick as quick could be!
I felt bad for that old man,
But someday he would see...
NEVER EAT FROZEN MEATLOAF ON A STICK!!!!!!
Author notes
It took me 30 minutes to read all the rules... LOL
Written September 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Tempus Fugit by Long Road Home.
2007 points, ended May 29, 2007, 53 entries
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Thank you, thank you! lol I'm just doing my job!!!
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you saved his life you deserve a medal and a pat on the back well done superhero champion
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Oh no!!! Not the frozen meatloaf on a stick!!!!
Hurry!!! You must run around the room 5 times! That is the only cure!!!!! LOL! Thanks for commenting!
%Haley%
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lol, thanks for commenting! It's true... never eat frozen meatloaf on a stick! What if it breaks your teeth or you swallow the stick?lol!
I tried to write this in
pig latin... but I found that I cannot
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Hahaha! That old man was ME! And for that, I shall taunt you mercilessly.
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now you tell me, sorry but i just ate five of them before i read this poem, next tinme i will have frozen egg on a stick. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love!
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