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Angel

Angel

With wings of softest velvet
and eyes so sincere
fingertips so healing
and honesty so real
with love through every action
and flight with every word

Those wings glid so flawlessly
those eyes cry tears of joy
those fingertips are comforting
that honesty is sure
the love is never ending
and the journey goes on

Author notes

This is what my image of an Angel is like. I think it may differ with different poets but I think this describes one pretty well. Comments very much appreciated.

Beautiful Tragedies
Option 1

Written September 3rd, 2006

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  • Kappa Pyua
    August 11
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    The words flow like water to me. I drank this piece and would like to drink many more. Thanks for sharing this. UNT


  • Lady Michaella
    February 11
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    fanatastic imagery here!!

    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    wow
    what a beautiful picture you've painted here

  • thenorthernstar
    August 11, 2008
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    very cool I enjoyed i t thanks for entering


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 11, 2008

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    I like this one as well. I think I'm going to just add you to my favs. lol. Keep up the great job. keep writing like this and I'm sure one day you will have your own book of poetry upon a shelf.


  • Moonlight Complex
    October 27, 2007
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    Great write. Wonderful rhyming, thanks for the entry.


  • Blue Rew silver member
    May 19, 2007

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    I view an angel as a spiritual being and not an animal. Although this is a lovely piece, I have to say in my view, it has no place in this particular contest. Blue

  • Aurora Ceres
    May 16, 2007

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    First let me say, you get an A for the background! I love blue! Your poem is lovely and a fantastic point of view as the 'image' of an Angel. What I would like to think one to be anway. You didn't put an option as to the family memer you wanted to be so, as Kara stated, you need to make the choice as to whether you'd like to join the family....we would be delighted.
    Good job, thank you for entering!


  • Tomorrows Window
    May 16, 2007

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    Very very nice!!! It was a beautiful description; you painted a picture beautifully! but aside from this, you failed to comply with my rules. Therefore, if you still wish to be in my family (as I hope you do) I will have to award you the title of Ugly step _____ (fill in position lol). I'm sorry, but this was the option besides DQing you. I updated the page numerous times. So, if you'd like to be in my family, please let me know lol! (I am soooo not normal! )

    ~Love Kara


  • Erin200
    May 7, 2007

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    Wow. This is like my other poem called angelic. Great job. This is what I also think When i think of angels. Good job,you're going to the finalists, and keep writing!

    AmberAngel546


  • Death of the Author
    April 29, 2007

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    A very short, sweet, simple interpretation of an Angel, well done and thank you for entering my contest. Take care and good luck! x


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    March 15, 2007

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    "Those wings glid so flawlessly" I think you meant glide rather then glid it was a very well done poem I enjoyed it very much Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest

  • Cinnarry gold member
    September 3, 2006
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    well done

    Nice job, you almost have perfect meter in this piece.

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