Illuminating is his everlasting light unto our paths.
Nothing can overcome faith.
Great is he, for he forgives us no matter what. He does not judge.
Omnipotent, he is the almighty, the invincible.
Don't underestimate...for with him we can accomplish the impossible.
Weathering the toughest of situations with him by our sides.
Entering the final gates shall be the high-lite of our lives.
Temptation has no hold over us, he releases us from hate's grip.
Remember the sacrifice he made for us.
Undying is the memory of all the great things he's done.
Sin cannot separate us from him, for we have been saved.
Tantalizing is his ongoing love for each of his master creations.
*IN GOD WE TRUST*
Author notes
*IN GOD WE TRUST*FOREVER AND ALWAYS*BE THANKFUL FOR EVERYTHING HE'S DONE FOR US*I HOPE YOU GET THROUGH YOU ROUGH TIME, WHITETIGER, AND REMEMBER YOU ALWAYS HAVE HIM AND US TO COMFORT YOU*
Written September 3rd, 2006
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Awesome! This was wonderfully written with a message for all who are open minded enough to receive! Very well done. Thanks for this entry and good luck.
Jeannie
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I'm not religious. I've written acrostics before, too, but it's generally a last-resort thing. It's not a big deal. The wording wasn't too vivid either. Try for something everyone can get into next time!
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I can't really leave a legit comment on this.. You expressed your message well though. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Yay! I submitted it for you!
Told ya I would try to get it featured in the spotlight!
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This won't let me applaud you no mores cause I already did a while ago, but I still think that this is one of the best acrostics on AP! It is certainly one of the most meaningful!!! I am going to try to get it featured!
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This is a great testament of faith! Great write. Thanks for sharing!
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As a Christian myself, I love stumbling upon writes with the glory of God in them. Wonderful job in showing such faith and hope in the one above us. The flow was good as with the wording, thanks for entering and good luck!
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Eh, I'm more into universal themes- something that everyone can relate to. I, myself am not a religious person so I cannot really see myself liking this piece, but the execution was fine.
The wording was dead on- a little bland in my opinion. I think you could have gone further into the imagery and meaning behind the piece.
Overall, good poem. We'll see how fishbone likes it. Thank you for the entry. -
love it
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Thank you for your entry
What a wonderful praise poem. You have certainly exaulted him in this poem.
Good luck
God Bless
Tammy -
Thank You!
Dear DiStUrBeD93, I sincerley thank you for writing such a beautiful poem that is full of hope andf faith. I do agree with you and God is getting me through a rough and tough time. Thank you for every thing you have done for me by writing this poem. Have a wonderful labor day. Sincerely, whitetiger1251 aka Paul
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I know Daddy will appreciate this... it is a great write!!!!!!! I thank you very much for you kind words and I also love that you would take the time to write this for him!!!!!!! Great write!!!!!!! Good luck!!!!!!! Rock On!!!!!!!
xoxo
Meg
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Awesome job!!! Keep writing
~SAMI~
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