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To Know Inside

This gorgeous light inside
It dazzles me with it's vivaciousness
There are no words of praise enough
To describe it's beauty

This tremendous heavenly music
My soul feels feint with appreciation
All the leaves
Dancing in the sun and the wind
Do not come close to it

This lovely joyous feeling
Awakening from within
Sails bellowing in the breeze
Waves sliding
Onto the crystal beach

And then, this Divine sweetness inside
Utterly beyond description









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Welcome youself inside.

Written September 3rd, 2006

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  • Puppydog gold member
    September 19, 2006
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    A TRULY BEAUTIFUL AND INSPIRING POEM

    When that feeling is there is so beautiful and one that we hope will remain forever.


  • ToltecWarrior
    September 12, 2006
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    beyond description.... yet you have captured the essence well here, my friend. I sometimes get caught up in the world's physical beauties, often forgetting that the true beauty of spirit is beyond anything we can see or touch upon this mortal plane of existance. Thank you for reminding me of the truth. Also, great picture!

    your friend,

    Laura


  • Taranand
    September 11, 2006
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    Yes, Some times it's all I can do just to laugh and to cry simultaniously, when I experience the gratitude for all I've been given. ~ This Life; This beautiful breath. Riches almost beyond my understanding.
    ...and thank you for your joyousness too.

  • Silentium
    September 9, 2006
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    Stunning


    Oh, the Light! The Bliss! You write it so well, dear Poet, although you claim...

    "And then, this Divine sweetness inside
    Utterly beyond description"

    That such is yours (as well as mine and everyone's) ... that you embrace it and dance to its eternal rhythm, oh how blessed you are! For not many find that innate Bliss within and drink deeply from its waters. Your Joy is my Joy, Poet. Thank you for expressing it so beautifully and sharing it with all!


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 9, 2006
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    SO SWEETLY BEAUTIFUL!

    Yes, inside of ones heart and soul amazing things are to be found.


  • Taranand
    September 7, 2006
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    Thanks Karen,
    You always brighten my day. Tara


  • Watuwant silver member
    September 6, 2006
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    Divine little ditty, Tara!
    peace
    doug


  • transcendental baby gold member
    September 4, 2006
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    You have such a beautiful soul, sista


  • suseann
    September 3, 2006
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    That sheer essence of the life force is the celebration of but a fleeting moment of the communion with the Creator.A gift from him in given in love.~~Suseann Wonderful peace and piece you've penned.

  • Redoute
    September 3, 2006
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    much better - i can seeeeeee! he he, thanks again for sharing


  • Taranand
    September 3, 2006
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    Yes, in love with LIFE.
    Thanks for the advice. I switched the colours around. Tara

  • Redoute
    September 3, 2006
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    sounds like you're in loooooooove Taranand - he he...

    only one nit, i found this colour font difficult to see against this background.

    thanks for sharing, rose.

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