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Only Beginners




Only beginners scream when nothing’s wrong
Only beginners thunder with the throng
Only beginners wear tie dyed sarongs
Only beginners don’t think they belong

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Only beginners waltz with no bow tie
Only beginners look you in the eye
Only beginners dare to live and die
Only beginners, that is you and I



WildStorm and DancingRed. 020906

Author notes

Written in collaboration with my sister dearest - DancingRed
allpoetry.com/poets/DancingRed

Please check out her page and all of her awesome poetry
lots of love to you too Hannah!
Written September 2nd, 2006

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  • DancingRed
    December 19, 2006

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    WildStorm!

    We're beginners, right? We're learning. We're screaming for the fun of it. We go with the flow, but stand out from the crowd - we know we don't belong. We're different. We have real feelings. We dare to have a life (knowing death is part of life too). That's us.

    Lots of love to you!

  • Suicide-is-Silent
    September 10, 2006
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    love it... for it is so true and it backs up its case, which gives it more value.