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Tied Up Words

Why does my tongue get tied?
Why didn't I even try?
I had the chance,
I hope I will again,
But maybe not,
Because I had the chance then lost.
But you laugh with me.
Not at me.
This is the way it should be.
This feeling inside is amazing,
Can you say the same thing?
But you walk in with that girl so pretty.
And I wonder if that couldn't have been me.

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Written September 2nd, 2006

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  • Molassis
    September 4, 2006
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    awww... maybe you'll get another chance!!!

    I think this is so sweet and innocent...

    You've done a really great job in expressing yourself...

    I think we've all been 'there'... tongue-tied and everything... and it's a hard place to be for sure...

    Whatever happens with this person... don't stop writing and please... believe in yourself... ok? This really is an awesome little write and I am glad I came to read it!!!

    ~Melissa


  • AutumnEmotion
    September 2, 2006
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    the last part of this hasnt happened yet but i hope it doesnt