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The Story of a Girl

Treading water in a sea
Of lost hope and darkness
My whole story of life untold,
The life of a girl, 15 years old.

Not wanting to live,
Not ready to die.
Such a hard choice
In these eyes of mine

Being loved one minute,
Then Hated the next.
I'm not going to please the whole world,
It's way too much to take!!!

A cut here, a cut there,
Some blood here, some blood there
I'm not hurting anyone , am I?

No, is the answer,
I'm only helping myself
With the emotional pain
That I cannot take!

I guess my story will continue
The story of my life is
Spared once again
The story of a girl, 15 years old.

Like all the endings to fairy-tales,
I hope mine has a decent ending...

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Ummm...i wrote this after I got in a fight with \
Written September 2nd, 2006

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  • Little-Kiowa
    September 4, 2006
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    Thank you love I always enjoy reading your comments!!!


  • She burns
    September 3, 2006
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    Touching and heartfelt...

    This is so sad and very touching,full of hope and love,Simple yet explains so much,This just happens all the time,hunny,everywhere and everytime,I hope you feel better there,i love you and i hope you feel better there alanna