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My best friend whom i lost in feb. 02

Matthew saw her behind tears
Between comfort delicious eyes
Hours flow
Hospice hurry for she called angels
End the moment

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A pim I submitted on poets.com, and won $25.00.
Written September 2nd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • ListeningToSilence
    February 4
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    Beautiful write. good luck. x


  • nobodys looking
    May 14, 2007

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    this is amazing and sad. thankfully I haven't lost a close friend, that must have been awful for you.


  • Sacrificial Love
    February 28, 2007
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    Grief....

    is heartache of the worst kind...
    very good...

    Thanks for entering...
    Heidi


  • Princessdove
    February 19, 2007

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    Nice poem. I am sorry for your loss. I really like the line "Hospice hurry for she called angels". Very sincere sounding. Good write, Keep up the good work.


  • sprack44
    February 19, 2007

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    well it seems like you didn't spend much time on this...

    and it seems rather short..

    its cute tho, i'll give it some thought

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