I await you as you join me in our aquatic domain
You expression reveals the anticipation but
You ignore me
Deny me
Your touch
As the hot rushing water cascades across you
Warm laughter and pleasure rises within me
Knowing this delay is part of the dance
The dance of flirtatious desire
Still, I await you, as you
Slowly turn towards me,
I reciprocate your seductive smile
Your mischievous thoughts,
The allure of your sculptured torso
Still, I steal glances of you,
Like a corporate embezzler
Slowly
Fantasizing of you
Like an unmarried virgin
Eager
As you moan from the heat of the water that arouses
Your wants, your desires
Emanating from the condensation engulfing us
I imagine your thoughts behind those eyes
Yes those hazel pearls that burn through me
Speaking to me
While listening to your breathing becoming labored
While I await you
Long for you
But not long their after
You accept me
Within your hands as you squeeze me tightly
I gasp, with pleasure
Taking in your wet warmth,
Feeling
Thankful anticipation
You embrace me gently
Slowly, but with strong and purposeful hands
You force me between you and firmly place me on the spot
That spot that is illicit from others,
But me
Shorn from others
But me
Yes me, as I abide your wishes
Toil for your discernment
Eager for your repast
I hold firm to that spot that excites,
That spot that throbs, pulsate
With pleasure, within you
You lean against the cold wall
As I continue to press against you
In you
As the heat drips off of my backside
The hot stream travels its way from me
You hold me firmly between you as the feverish pace increases
Amplifies like rough stones against tender feet
Invigorating yet painful towards sexual climax
I am there for you as I hear you voice begin
To crescendo,
From your
Lofty breast that
Palpitates
As I hear
Screams,
screams,
screams
Of Orgasmic pleasure surging past me
Like the flow from the shower head
In the shadows of our thoughts
As we slump slowly to the floor
With this I know,
Once again
An object of pleasure I will forever
And without a doubt will always be
For you
Author notes
Is it me or the loofah?
Written September 2nd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Make It Last... by YourWordsBurn.
300 points, ended September 11, 2006, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ink You Spilled Before by individuality.
600 points, ended January 7, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Contest By Aurielle by Aurielle.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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(drooling) ok...thanks for the distracting moment at work
The imagery in this is wonderful, Michael. Loved it, and to answer ur question it was YOU 
CC♥
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Pretty Hot huh? I read it again as well
Thank U
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WOw much more complex then the other writes. I love the metaphors and similies
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Very vivid,
i liked this poem, it was well written and very interesting. i think i'll be looking at my loofah in a different light from now on...Exfoliate
Dolores x
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LOL!!! My friend told me she had a hard to concentrating after I wrote one of my sensual poems so she had to take a shower. That's where this came from. Thanks for the getting it. ~ mykey
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a good poem, though i felt it went on a little more than needed really. it packed a punch then waned. i thank you kindly for entering your poetic piece and good luck to you in this contest - spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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i'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT, I HAD TO COME UP WITH SOMETHING FOR MY BUDDY ~ SHE LOVES IT ~ mikEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE -
thankya
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Nice format, this wasn't trashy and still it was descriptive. Thanks for entering my contest and GOOD LUCK.
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thankya
Thank you so much. I took this thought from a friend who took showers after reading erotic poetry. Great inspiration -
enchanting erotic prose
Oh my Goodness, a human Loofah thats got to be ardently sizzling. You have just perked up an old gals memeory.
Well I sure enjoyed the read, sounded like some action up in there. Eyes closed, mind at work, imagery goes wild, and the results are purely erotic. You have surely wrote a winner here. ... . write ON!. ... . ennovy
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Thanks - using anthropomorphism is fun for me. I place my self or someone in an inanimate object and give it the qualities I want. It makes for an interestinf read. ~ MIKeeeeeeeee
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LOL!! Thanks. I go back and forward sometimes. It depends on my feeling at the time. This one called for imagery more so than the other. Thanks for your kind review ~ winks & waves ~ MIKeeeeee
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Wow! Now this is the vivid imagery I was referring to that your other poem was in need of!
There is nothing to critique about this poem because I cannot seem to find anything wrong with it!!
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This is absolutely fabulous!! I will never see my loofah the same way again! It sounds rough but fun!! A great write!!
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LOL!! I was a little nervous with these. especially since the person that inpired me reads all of it. The hotel one I had to take a shower that night. It just came to me. I mean DAMN!!!!
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Hot, and Steamy
Hot damn, you got me all worked up, oh to come home from a hards day work and to this, I am speechless. I think that I would go to work everyday just to see what treat I would come home to, this is a wonderful write sure to win the contest and once again I am glad to be inspiration and most definately you, I will throw all my loofahs out. You can be my loofah any day.
raingoddess
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