If i could take back time
all the disicions i've made.
I wouldnt take him back For anything.
I thought my life was over.
though it just begun
and on that dredded day
god gave me a beautiful son
He looked at me with bright blue eyes
5 fingers around my thumb
as if he knew just who i was
his scared and troubled mom.
somehow i knew just what to do
Because god showed me how.
&& with that strenth i held him tight
and swore to never let go.
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my experience with having a baby at 15.
Written September 2nd, 2006
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a baby at fifteen? you're pretty fucking tough because i know nineteen-year-old girls who couldn't take care of a baby. [like me, for example.] he sounds great and i'm happy that you decided to keep him afterall. babies certainly are precious, aren't they?
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wow
This is really sweet and beautiful. It really shows how much love you have for your son and how much strength you give each other. I really like the line "I wouldn't take him back for anything". It says it all, really. I really like the way this begins and ends... the first line draws the reader in, and the last line is an excellent metaphor for a mother's eternal love.
I really admire your strength and courage. I can't imagine the emotions involved with going through what you have gone through, but I can really see that you've handled it quite well.
I agree with a couple of the other comments that a spell-check might be a good idea, but really... this is amazing.
Great write.
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I agree, spell check it and show him when he's older. Great piece. And your stength is something to admire.
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Long time no speak, glad to see you've kept up the writing. This is a brilliant poem, sweet, inspirational and above all quality. Good girl
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awww cute! Wow you're really brave to do that.
Junkie-Heart said it better, but yeah.
Great piece, it was so sweet!
Save this to show him when he's older =]
keep up the good work
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I have tremendous respect for you for not only keeping your baby, but not even for a moment regretting him. It takes a strong-willed person to do that. I admire that trait in people.
Only thing, you might want to use a spell-check.
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I love it
Nicely excuted. ...stren(g)th is all to look for..
keep a low tolerance for pleasure
as the words flow from your pen!
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