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To Make Me Whole

Sip gently from the cup of Love
Hold my heart within your hands
To forever walk these lands

Caress with tenderness, my broken soul
Shelter me deep within your essence
Wrap my fragile being inside your presence

To forever walk these lands
Side by side, one soul, one body
From truth, my existence set free

Wrap my fragile being inside your presence
Slowly make me believe in trust
Your heart holds love, not only lust

From truth, my existence set free
Caress with tenderness, my broken soul
Sip gently from the cup of Love
Each tender kiss to make me whole

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Written September 2nd, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 3, 2006
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    Thank you hun, appreciate the comments. And when are you goingto write a ripple, you have been doing forms??

    Storm

  • Night Valkyrie
    September 3, 2006
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    And once again, beautiful. I can feel the longing in this one as well. And I really do like your ripples, they add something to the poem. Great presentation hon.

    Vickie

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 2, 2006
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    Thanks hun, your comments are most appreciated.

    Storm
  • Trackrules
    September 2, 2006
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    lots of feeling in this one baby. I will gladly sip from your cup of love. Love you sweetheart.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 2, 2006
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    Thank you hun. Appreciate the comments.

    Storm
  • Keith Drew gold member
    September 2, 2006
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    beautiful

    Sip I do as each word of verse I drink in.
    Beautiful simply beautiful.
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