Bid Farewell to warm summer's end,
Sing my lover, forever transcend
With her touch across the countryside
Her beauty in seasons I abide
Aura made of dazzling hue
Crimson, scarlet and gold of virtue
To prosper in harvest moon's playgrounds
To taste sweet gourds as eagerness abounds
Dance to her festive ditty,
Watch her strip her leaves to leave a splendor body
She fills me with such pleasure
Through the warm winds I whisper
Welcoming her always through the new year
As I watch her blissful endless premiere
Author notes
Farewell
Countryside
Dazzling
Crimson
Scarlet
Harvest moon
Gourds
Abounds
Festive
Leaves
Splendor
Pleasure
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enjoy my first word bank poem
Written September 2nd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Autumn Word Bank ~ by Frozentearz.
300 points, ended September 7, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is a poem I've had bookmarked for a long time, still love it every time I read it.
I hope you don't mind that I have added it to a list on my page for favorite poems by other authors. Any problem with that, please just let me know.
Best wishes,
~J.
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Time for sporadic comment.
My window if open, and I can smell autumn, so I was just drawn to this.
Lines 9-12 the rhyme was a little...odd.
The personification of autumn was very interesting. The dance being the ridding of the leaves was something I've never seen before, and is, well....very intrigueing.
I would have to say that the first four lines were my favorite in a technical sense. Very flowy-ish. But I still like the idea of the dance.
Beautiful write. -
I absolutley loves poems about autumn. And I think your rhyming is impecible. I really liked this poem. The imagery is amazing, and I can picture everything you write. Also all the personification of the trees is good too. Keep up the good work.
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This is beautifully put together. It's like a love poem to the season, and very enjoyable to read. Good luck in the competition!
~J. -
Excellant and fun
A very good write. -
Dance to her festive ditty.... I just love that line! For your first word bank, you delivered a wonderful piece full of imagery and used the words well! Thanks for sharing and entering the contest. Best wishes and good luck!
Blessings,
Frog~ -
intriguingly interesting
not bad for a first time!!! a pretty coherent and a flawless flow in this poem.
-Keep the ink flowing!
-Dave
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