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The Song of Buffalo Woman

Song of Buffalo Woman
In honor she sings of the Light,
in which Spirit shows us right.
Her lightness shows us white,
so Crystal bright.
Buffalo woman is a woman of day,
shooting arrows of beauty our way.
We call her  here in soft white glow,
to help us understand and know.
Through my heart she comes,
filling my life with the unity of one.
She shines from my heart,
sacred tipi, sacred hat, Buffalo heart.

She is returning to me,
all the beauty to see.
Buffalo Woman is calling, will you answer?
Buffalo Woman is calling, will you dance with her?
She's calling light, she's calling peace.
She's calling Spirit, she's calling me.
She's calling you, will you answer her?
Yes, I will answer her call, join me there.

Author notes

This is poem was writen from a Caddoan legend of how the White Calf Buffalo Woman was a spiritual woman that brought the message of how to be one with Wanka Tanka (Great Spirit). She supposedly traveled from tribe to tribe and was a sacred pipe carrier. My Indian Zodiac Sign is Bear - Libra.
Written September 2nd, 2006

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  • Dark Otter
    May 12
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    Nice to stop by

    and enjoy your work. I love the total. The background and color, picture and poem all speak to me.


  • parenchma
    August 19, 2008

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    Thank you for your comment on Aversion. I live in Caddo parish. Here is something I think you will enjoy
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4165251

    I had the idea and researched it a bit and found the picture linked. I encountered the indian spirit guides and discovered (note my avatar) that I was an owl.


  • maa gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    wow, I got goosebumps while reading your poem ... it happens sometimes, when I encounter a message that is very important for me to listen to ... and I will listen ...
    the buffalo looks similar to my zodiac-sign taurus, so somehow, there is a synchronicity right here already ... buffalo tells me of strength and endurance, stability, too ...
    and further on, I am happy to receive the invitation of realizing the unity with the great spirit, encompassing all that is, without reserve ...

    thank you so much for offering this precious gift to me through your insightful and inspiring tale,

    maa *hug


  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    How beautiful a story. You should be so proud of your ability to write about such legends so they can tell the story for future generations. Also to enlighten folk like me who have a deep interest and respect for your people, both in your history and the present fight to rectify old wrongs. Niaish my friend for allowing me the privilege of reading your work.


  • calvspw
    January 25, 2007

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    Stand up and give praise

    I thought I had commented on this poem before, but don't see anything from me, I found the poem bringing me into the story of our tribes, hearing the music and thunder as one. I loved the way you presented this fine piece. Walk in peace with the father at your side and wind behind you. thank you for sharing a wonderful story for all to see. MOON (cari)


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    November 15, 2006
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    Yes I will join you there mom. Spirit is calling and using all the different forms at His disposal to help us, guide us and watch over us as we begin this long journey back to spirit. I love you and miss you so much!

    Hugs and loves
    Your girls,
    Chryssa and Bren


  • Lauren Noir
    November 7, 2006
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    Oooh, I loved this1
    It seemed so mystical and spiritual. It was really interesting, I did like the story behind it. I could feel the sort of old,rustic feel to it

    Really interesting and beauitful
    A great piece of work


  • wishintreeUK
    October 10, 2006
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    A beautiful spiritual writing!

    This is truly a beautiful piece of writing, having a strong spiritual feel threaded all the way through it. Can I ask please, is Buffalo Woman a legend, or was she someone who actually lived? I do hope you do not mind my asking you these questions.

    ~Katie~


  • astralshepherd gold member
    September 13, 2006
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    I am so impressed with the power and life within your poem, song really, how it lifts my heart along a path i can only imagine. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    September 6, 2006
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    That legend I remember reading and I loved it. I got it from our county library it was during my research into the tribes but I could not find enough to read and research about....


  • azure85 gold member
    September 4, 2006
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    What a wonderful legend to write about, and you did it so well. Such beautiful descriptions throughout your poem.

    Susie


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 3, 2006
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    "She's calling light, she's calling peace.
    She's calling Spirit, she's calling me.
    She's calling you, will you answer her?
    Yes, I will answer her call, join me there."

    Beautifully penned, my Sister...Such Truth & Wisdom graces your pages, dear Lady...& what a gorgeous background you've used, as well...Good luck in the contest...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Tam
    September 2, 2006
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    lovely

    This is a lovely, lovely write. So well done. And the graphic is just wonderful. I find your words to be so soothing to my soul. I feel peace within your written words and it is an honor to read your work. Blessings! Tammy


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    September 2, 2006
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    I am so sorry to hear about your friend. My sincere wishes go out to the Great Spirit, Father Sky and Mother Earth to heal him back to good health.

    Char

  • Sai Babas Lotus
    September 2, 2006
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    Very beautiful, Mom. I could feel the presence of the Buffalo Woman in my heart as I read your lovely poem. She came across as a very pure spirit, full of goodness, peace and light and ofcourse, love. I adore the background and border you have for the poem. The rhyme and flow is excellent. The only small question I have is - What is the sacred tipi?

    Thank you for sharing this lovely poem and song.

    Warm hugs,

    Charishma


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    September 2, 2006
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    The word are truth and that is why we are str

    My Dear sister
    This was beautiful and thank you for entering. Spirits kept me up all night again. I found out who is was. Not of us. A dear friend of mine doesnt have much time left. He is 150 miles away. may have to leave to help his family to helo them understand why it had to be that way. He has liver damage. The family doesnt know just me.
    Lovw you
    Morningstar Good Luck Sis

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