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Sister Love

I used to think I'd never lose
How come I lost after all?

[[ You're a loser, little girl
        a forgotten loser
   no one wants to know you,
             you know it, little girl ]]

I was around all the time
the times you needed me
the times you didn't

The path underneath my bare feet
used to lead me to victory
This time
don't let me say

[[ I don't want to know you,
     little girl,
 you're no more than a burden,
         a useless sister ]]

My life used to be about fantasies
The perfect family
But sister love
always missed

[[ You're no longer holding me back,
     little girl,
       I'm leaving you alone,
  just as you deserve ]]

Now I'm all alone
Don't make me say it one more time
Don't make me ..

I lost

Author notes

Another piece of Luces Diary.
Her sister ignored her most of her life and got really mad when she found out Luce was having a baby.

Written September 2nd, 2006

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